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T'ylah, Immortal Child of Tremas

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T'ylah, Immortal Child of Tremas

Post by SailorSilvanesti on Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:31 pm

Name: T'ylah [Say: Thai-Lah]

Age: 148, looks about 18. [Was 11 when placed in charge of Infant Sphyria]

Race: Tremarian, Immortal, [Tremarian = from another world]

Gender: Female

Homeland: Fiacre, travels with Sphyria.

Class: Shaper

SubClass: Warrior

Elemental Affinities: Earth, Wind, Life
Primary: Life [Shaper of Flesh & Healer]
Secondary: Earth [Shaper of Trees & Rocks]
Tertiary: Wind [Limited Elemental Control]

Strengths: Strong at using Bow and Arrows, other Ranged Weapons.
In hand-to-Hand, Strong when using Celestial Blade "Star's Might". [Short, Purple Blade, miniature of Galactic Oblivion.]
Strong Healing and Shaping Abilities. [Flesh and Earth -Trees, Rocks, etc]

Weaknesses: Empathic to a degree, emotions such as fear or pain from opponent distract her.
Strong-willed. Partially Impulsive.

Battle Style: Better at long range attacks, with her bow, but is also excellent at close-range fighting. Especially with the Celestial Blade [Star's Might] she was given by the creatures that gifted Sphyria with Galactic Oblivion.

Personality: Highly compassionate and Imaginative, created Sphyria's wings for her, StarBright her animal companion and altered her own appearence -she was going through what the Crystalborn deemed as a 'Wings Phase".
Changes hair colour on an almost daily basis. T'ylah is fun, with a great sense of humour, but she can be as stubborn as her warrior-friend, usually resulting in battle!

History: T'ylah, the last child on Tremas -the planet's atmosphere sterilised all but a few who were genetically immune, she was the youngest of six children [of diierent parents].
When the Starcomers appeared, they were wnderful and marvelled at the children, playing with them and giving them gifts.
She was there when Sphyria was born, to welcome her 'soul-companion' into the world. The small blue bundle had been adorable! Her shaping gifts had been discovered not long after that, and, in the short time before the Starcomers became ill, she was taught to use them.
She had tried to heal them too, it did not work, the planet merely undid what she fixed!

An accident, swift and terrible, robbed her of her parents, the Starcomers could no longer offer her sanctuary as they were dying...
An opportunity to live a new life with her soul-companion, on a new world, was given.
She took it eagerly.
The Starcomers placed her in the crystal pod with her sister and told her it would be alright, to sleep and think of her parents...

The ship had crashed onto a new world with a jolt that awoke her. Other Starcomers, of a different colour, rushed to help...and so their journey began...

Companion: Was gifted with Unicorn Companion 'Brightstar' by Astereans, shaped from a strange breed they brought with them.

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Post by Celestria on Sun Aug 15, 2010 2:06 am

Okay, Flesh-shaping is actually Life Elemental since it's linked to Cure. All the Flesh-Shapers were Healers, remember?

Earth is good for Treeshaping, it also allows you to Rockshape at the same time. We don't separate the two aspects.

Again, Soul, as an Element, is limited to the Dullahan only at the moment.

Your "Strengths" section sounds more like Personality traits, which are very distinct from the more combat and skills oriented nature of the Strengths and Weaknesses sections. I need you to edit that section to focus on those aspects of skills and abilities more than personality. If you need examples to work from, we can help you there.

Unicorns in Astraea? Ya know. . . I kinda like that idea. *grin* I might have to run with it. The Companion Unicorn will have to be written up under the Pets and Mounts section.

The Shaping ability as you describe, in terms of altering appearance, will have to be written up as a spell for her. I'm still figuring out what levels of Fleshshaping are approximate to which Tier of spell, but I should have that figured out soon.

Leia's a Shaper too, so it's something I need to get figured out soon. As soon as I do I'll get a guide up regarding it.

Bump when you get the necessary edits done. *smile*

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Post by SailorSilvanesti on Sun Aug 15, 2010 2:56 am

Fixed!
-No longer 'Soul'
-Fixed Strengths, Weknesses and Personality Traits.
-Renamed Unicorn, Brightstar.
I just though that having a weapon called "Star's Might" and a Unicorn named "StarBright" was a little too...silly?

Also, do you think Ocean's Rage or Aqua Oblivion sounds better?
Having trouble deciding!
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Post by Celestria on Sun Aug 15, 2010 3:40 pm

Starbright was a doll and a cartoon series in the 80's. Brightstar works quite well. *smile*

Okay, an Element only needs to be listed ONCE in the tree. Since Life is in the Secondary place, it doesn't need to ALSO be in the primary, unless you want Life in Primary and Earth in Secondary.

Other than that, I think this is looking good.

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