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Brightstar ~ Loyal Unicorn of the Night

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Brightstar ~ Loyal Unicorn of the Night

Post by SailorSilvanesti on Sun Aug 15, 2010 3:16 am

Name: Brightstar

Trainer/Friend/Owner: Mount of T'ylah, [Who is Companion to Sphyria]

Species: Unicorn

Size: Generally the size of a normal horse, though appears slightly more 'delicate'.

Elemental Association: Aether/Life/Light

Abilities

Light: Stealth
Element: Aether
Range: Her own body, cannot be projected.
Cooldown [No. Posts]: 0
Appearance: None, technically, her body turns invisible.
She 'cloaks' herself by concentrating and turning invisible to the naked eye.
However, if attacked, she will turn visible again; she cannot perform any offensive magic or action whilst 'cloaked'.

Medium: Esuna
Element: Life
Range: Approx. 5ft radius, so max. two or three can be cured at one time.
Cooldown [No. Posts]: 4
Appearance: Brightstar's horn glows white, head raised in the air, it projects a sort of cone of light downwards. Any part of human, elf, creature within radius is cured [poison/minor injuries/burns].

Strong: Radiance.
Element: Light
Range: up to 30ft
Cooldown [No. Posts]: 6
Appearance: Brightstar's body, beginning with mane, horn and star patterns, begin to glow bright white. Her whole body becomes encompassed, when enough energy is charged, it releases into a giant shockwave of Light energy.

Vague Telepathy, between Brightstar, T'ylah and Sphyria; she has recently formed a mental bond with the dragon hatchling, Midnite.

Non-Magical Ability: The wings crafted by T'ylah allow her to fly short distances, also effective as a weapon.

Weaknesses: Use of Darkness Spells on or around Brightstar can make her ill, can be captured using Darkness or Gravity Elements. Nth Metal can be a problem too, as she is a magical being.
*4-5 Post Cooldown after using Esura, makes for difficulty curing more than one person at a time*

Battle Style: Brightstar is usually not directly involved in Battle, as her owner/friend usually stays off the abttlefield and uses ranged weapons [bow/slingshot], but she does ride into battle on occasion.
Brightstar was trained with the best Warhorses, she can side-step oncoming attacks and uses her teeth, horn and hooves to best weaponary advantage.

Occasionally uses wings to side-swipe enemies too close; in battle situations, [though rarely used otherwise] Brightstar will use her most powerful attack, Radiance, a powerful wave of Light Energy that either knocks hostile opponents off their feet or forces them into magical comas.

History: Was found as a foal by the Astereans, no one knows her true origins, she always had the star coat, and horn.
Brightstar was given to T'ylah on the day she and Sphyria left Asterea, being a Shaper, T'ylah gave her wings. Brightstar now enjoys 'galloping through the skies'.

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Re: Brightstar ~ Loyal Unicorn of the Night

Post by Celestria on Sun Aug 15, 2010 3:51 pm

Okay, as far as Abilities, they need to be spelled out and there can be three of them, since I presume Brightstar is both Pet and Mount. A "Light" attack or ability which can be used at will, a "Medium" attack or ability with a 3 or 4 (or sometimes greater) post cooldown, and a "Strong" attack or ability with a 4, or 5, or even 6 post cooldown.

Cooldowns mean that you have to wait a certain number of posts before you can use that ability again.

Now, Healing is going to be twitchy as a Pet Ability, verging on not-allowable. I would actually suggest, as an alternative, something like a Poisona which cures poisons and toxins or even Esuna, which is a general cure status-effect ability. However, Esuna is going to be a higher level ability than simply Poisona, and while Poisona can be a "Light" Ability, Esuna would be a "Medium". At the very least any true "Healing" would have to be a "Strong" ability if allowed at all.

Battle style is intended to describe how Brightstar fights, not necessarily how her friend does, but you do include something of that so it's okay.

Looks good so far.

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Re: Brightstar ~ Loyal Unicorn of the Night

Post by SailorSilvanesti on Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:39 pm

Better?
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Post by Celestria on Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:57 pm

Better, but still not perfect. I realize that you want room for future development, but we need to have the other abilities spelled out.

Esuna would be the "Medium" ability, probably with a 4 post cooldown.

You need a "Light" ability and a "Heavy" ability. If you need suggestions you can go with something in terms of elemental attacks, only try to keep them straightforward, or you can go with possibly some form of shapeshifting, or something completely unique.

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Re: Brightstar ~ Loyal Unicorn of the Night

Post by SailorSilvanesti on Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:06 pm

Light
Can she have 'Stealth', the ability to turn invisible?
More of, she can change her form to mimic her surroundings or simply disappears, invisible.
Not sure.

Strong
I mentioned she 'exploded with magical energy' well, I kind of had an idea about that being an ability that I wanted to run past you. It would be rare as it requires a lot of MP/Cool Down Time.
How about 'Radiance', the ability to release a powerful wave of concentrated Light Energy. [Body glows and powerful white light radiates in a shockwave.

Are these ideas okay?
I wanted her to be unique, also, can we have Dragons, I have one on ElfQuest.com [Midnite] -if you go to the EQ Dollz Thread, you'll see my Self-Elf with a little Midnite at her relative height.
~Height according to the time passed on the T'n'L Tardis!~
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Post by Celestria on Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:19 pm

*chuckle*

Yes, you can have Midnite. *smile* Yes, we can have Dragons as pets. Just keep in mind that I don't think that a Pet should be the size of Ramoth from Pern. Anything larger than the First Generation Dragons needs to be a Shokanjuu which is a different issue entirely.

As for the Radiance, I like it. Sounds like it'd be a 6 post Cooldown. Radius of effect something like 30 feet around her.

As for the Invisibility or Camoflage . . . well, I can see something like that, but given the limitations on Pets I'd say that attacking breaks the charm and makes her reappear, though she can move while invisible so long as she does not take any offensive moves.

Can you live with that?

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Post by SailorSilvanesti on Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:27 pm

YES! ^^

Wait'll you meet my newest 'Midnite'!
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Post by Celestria on Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:36 pm

Okay, edit the abilities into the template and lemme know when you have it ready.

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Post by SailorSilvanesti on Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:48 pm

Finished the modifications to Brightstar!
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Post by Celestria on Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:53 pm

Okay, Stealth doesn't need a cooldown, but it cannot be restored in the same post in which it falls, okay? Esuna is 4 posts. Radiance is 6 posts.

Variables in things like this are not conducive to being certain in battle. If we thing something needs a longer Cooldown, we'll tell you. Okay?

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Post by SailorSilvanesti on Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:39 am

Fixed!
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Post by Celestria on Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:42 am

Alright, and as a clarification Esuna *also* cures things like Slow, Blind, Silence, and the other annoying Status Effects that sometimes creep up in battle.

It has to do with the Final Fantasy influence in the world setting.

With that cleared up . . .

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