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Aleister Crowley

Post by Aleister_Crowley on Tue Sep 28, 2010 7:58 pm

Name: Aleister Crowley.

Age: 17.

Race: Human.

Gender: Male.

Homeland: He's living at Glaisne.

Class: Dark Knight.

SubClass: Thief.

Elemental Affinities:

Primary: Darkness.
Secondary: Fire.
Tertiary: Thunder.

Strengths: Since he was young he has been physically strong and fast, being able to beat thugs in the streets when they attacked him. A thing that must be said is that he is blind, and thanks to that weakness he has all his other senses in better state than normal humans would have them, to the point of hearing the breathing of others, knowing slight changes of temperature and even knowing where one is cooking his food, even if he is at more than 200 meters of distance. He is also knowledgable about occultism, religion and, in most part, demonology. He has been able to master dark spells to help himself, but he is not too good or too bad at using them.

His most special ability is to use a mask in order to regain the ability to see for the time he has it on. It can only be used when his companion says he can. (Explained in detail on story). This lets him to be more efficient on battle, being able to use his five senses in a more efficient way.

Weaknesses: He is blind. Even if he can hear and feel things better than anyone, he still lacks sight. He won't be able to see things in front of himself, so he can bump on objects or even get in serious danger if he is not careful enough. Different from other warriors, his weak point is in front, because he is always too worried of what could happen behind him, and he cannot be aware of everything at the same time.

His mask has devil powers residing inside, so wearing it incredibly increases his weakness to holy damage or purified things. He wouldn't be able to enter a church without being hurt.

Battle Style: He is better fighting at close range, and can't do it at a high distance. Again, because he is blind, he can't aim any kind of distance attack, so he is not confident of hitting the target. Even when he uses his mask, his sight is still not very good. But in close ranged battle, he can hear and feel the wind moving, indicating the possition of his enemy.

Appearance: He is fair skinned and has blond hair. The thing that most draws attention to him is the fact that he wears bandages around his eyes, hidding them from others. The true color of his eyes is grey. His clothing usually consists on a green leather jacket with white marks in the borders, plus a green cape. In his belt he hangs several demonic instruments and accultism tools, alongisde the grip of a sword (and only the grip). Finally, his pants are grey with red snake-shaped lines around it.

Personality: He is a quiet person and doesn't opens up with people too much. Since child he has not been treated well by the people around him, and that has left him with a subcouncious fear of approaching others, fearing that they could hurt him as his family did. But when he approaches someone, he can be a caring friend and a loyal person. He nevers betrays those who have trusted in him, giving his own trust back. He has a like for demonology and occultism, in part because it's useful for his mission, but mostly because he finds it interesting.

History: He was born in a poor family, with a poor and dangerous enviroment. Since birth he has been blind, so his parents, a pair of thieves and criminals, famous for their cruelty to others, never acknowledged him as their son, and prefered to place their attention into his brother. Still, they place bandages in his eyes, convincing him that they were horrible, in fact trying to make him look more scary to others.

Even in blindness, he was taught how to steal and rob by his parents. He soon became famous around the streets thanks to his great physical strength and skills. But he never liked to use them for bad things... Yet he was feared by everyone. Everyday he was attacked by thugs, people that hated his parents, and he always beated them up. He used his free time to roam around the streets.

One day, at the age of 14, he was attacked by five thugs, but managed to defend himself without even leaving a scratch on his skin. Some moments after, he felt how the enviroment around him started to change. He could not explain it, but it was as if he had been transported into a whole different world. A voice called out for him. Aleister felt afraid, but not enough to not ask the name of the person that was there with him.

The person introduced himself as a demon named Jiruub. He had come to him because he was strong and young, good enough to be the human he could posses in order to stay. Though Aleister couldn't really believe it, he was kind of interested by the idea of meeting a real demon.

Jiruub explained that in the demon world there was no king. Thousands of years ago, there was a demon simply called by the title of Demon King, that governed all the other thanks to his power and the fear that his only figure could give. But he could not escape death. Before dying, he placed all his powers in his crown, sent it to the human world, and killed himself. No one ever dared to find the crown, fearing that some kind of curse would fall on them.

But some human days ago, a group of young demons calling themselves the Seven Princes of Hell broke through the barriers of both worlds and went in the search of the Crown. Many demons felt inspired by them and decided to do the same thing, and some others simply couldn't stand having someone more powerful. That was Jiruub's case. He wanted the crown to be the strongest demon, and govern the demonic World as the Demon King did once.

He needed to reside in the body of a human to remain in the human world. But Aleister wasn't convinced, as he didn't know how a blind man could help a demon. Jiruub didn't know that he was blind, and became even more interested about him. He offered a deal: If he traveled with him, then he would make Aleister regain his ability to see.

Of course, Aleister accepted, and Jiruub gave him two things: A white venetian mask, which Jiruub would use to reside in him and to contact him in the outside world, and that would let him see again, only under Jiruub's authorization. And the grip of a sword, whose blade could become any weapon that his new eyes had seen.

That day, his journey in the search of the Demon's King Crown began.

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Site Connections: Leia introduced me to the site.


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Re: Aleister Crowley

Post by Celestria on Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:57 pm

Okay . . . He's blind, but he could read? Without needing special Braille books? Oookay, other than that huge plot hole . . .

I'm not seeing a lot to be argued with, you certainly do have creativity on your side.

You might can fix that plot hole by having his interest in books and magic happen after he gets his "new eyes".

I like the counteracting the loss of a weakness with the gaining of another weakness so that there's still a weakness to be dealt with.

You might need to talk to Darkness who plays Advocat about whether you want *your* Demons to be known to *his* Demons.

*chuckle* He's like Daredevil only different. This is kinda cool.

Unless Masurao sees something huge that I'm missing, even the plot hole isn't enough to cause major issues, so you can fix it or not as you wish.

Until then, Approved and have fun. We'll deal with that sword of his when you get it posted in the Weapons section.

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Post by Aleister_Crowley on Tue Sep 28, 2010 10:04 pm

Edited the plot hole.

And thanks!

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Post by Celestria on Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:55 pm

Alright, it's all good. Enjoy the site and find a spot to jump in. We're trying to get things moving again.

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